1
April
2011

I Love You6

I started off a lonely broken-hearted girl

Not knowing what the true definition of “love” was

Not understanding why brake ups hurt so much

And how so powerful “It’s over” could be

No longer wanting to give trust to a man ever again

I had completely given up

But then I met you

My cold and lonely nights were no longer blue

From the first kiss I knew this was true

Your hugs bring so much warmth to my body

It’s like I can’t compare you to nobody

With all the cute things you say

It always seems to brighten up my day

There’s no one else I rather be with than you

November 24th my wish came true

I give you my heart, trust and honesty

Just promise to no longer let my days be blue,

I love you.

       



6 Comments

  1.    15estevk at April 1st, 2011 12:35 pm:

    This really good , I lovee it . Very creative, & flows very good. Keep up the work && keep writing; It’s fantastic :)

  2.    15thursf at April 1st, 2011 12:41 pm:

    this is one of your best blog posts ever! i loved it! i loke how you kept the poem flowing!

  3.    15garcis at April 1st, 2011 12:53 pm:

    your a really good writer and this poem was amazing keep up the good work

  4.    15joneca at April 1st, 2011 1:47 pm:

    aww this poem was so cute! love is a strong word so be careful when you use it.
    good job!

  5.    'Alyssa:) at April 1st, 2011 1:59 pm:

    Thiss poem is real and I can relate too how you feel also!

  6.    tduong2014 at May 3rd, 2011 4:10 pm:

    This poem is so good, and is so rhythmic, and meaningful. The words flow together so good. You’re a really good poem-writer/poet. Keep it up. Happy blogging! :)



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